Звучит немного странно, но в общем по грамматике правильно

Everything looks correct to me, lines 5 and 7 are kind of weird out of context but that’s the author’s fault.

Btw your handwriting is amazing, never seen a similar one. Almost looks like it’s printed, keep up the good work!

Everything is correct, except семЬя. The task writer is not a native speaker: Josh assures that the hostess is beautiful only здесь, that is only in this place, It is very strange

Everything is good. Except in first line would be «семья».
Btw, u have really good handwriting though