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Hey, I am learning Russian on my own. It is sometimes difficult to check the correctness of a text. Could you please check it for any mistakes?





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  2. — Блуза is not a very common word as this type of clothes is kind of obsolete. Блузка is a women’s shirt. I don’t know what you wore but wearing two блуза at a time is definitely weird. Maybe it was something like рубашка, куртка, джемпер?

    — Я одеты очень удобно. Одеты is plural. If you’re a man (judging by other words used by you) you should have written одет.

    — Надо было надеть что-то тёплого. Should have written тёплое. Тёплого sounds like a partitive that doesn’t agree with что-то (only with чего-то) and doesn’t really work with clothes anyway. You can выпить чего-нибудь тёплого though but not надеть.

    — Сегодня, … You don’t need commas after adjectives that show time in these cases.

    — Я разденусь и я буду учиться. One я would be enough. Technically not a mistake but it’s excessive and doesn’t sound neutral. Also разденусь gives off vibes of being naked, but maybe that’s just me, not a mistake.

    — Я буду ещё писать. Actually your first variant sounded more common and neutral: Я буду писать ещё.

    Also your handwriting is perfect! Great job

  3. Your cursive is very good! Very readable.

    Why are you marking stresses?

    You write like you’re a male out of conjugations. But блуза (actually блузка but whatever) is a female cloth. Better to use word рубашка, if you’re male, or change pronoun and conjugations if you’re female.

  4. Сегодня я оделся в чёрную (?), белую блузку и красные штаны. Я одет очень удобно. Вчера я пошёл на работу, поэтому мне надо было надеть что-то тёплое. Я надел кальсоны, зелёные брюки, две (?) и зелёную куртку. Завтра я позавтракаю, приму душ и оденусь. Когда я вернусь из университета, я разденусь и (я — не нужно) буду учиться. На этой неделе у меня много работы. Пока это всё. Я буду еще писáть. (You put accent marks everywhere, except this word, though it’s much more important here, since пИсать means “to pee”)

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